On Saturday the plane was in the middle of the ocean of death and someone fell out of the plane they fell because someone pushed him when he was about to jump out off the plane and skydive but someone jammed the para shot and he was sky falling.
Someone quickly called
a superhero.That superhero was Batman. He quickly
jumped into his jet and flew over fast as possible.He opened
the hatch on his jet and quickly caught him.
Batman flew off with the man
in the back of the jet and Batman
saved the day and every one cared on with there
lives.
2 comments:
Great job Riley. I can see you have a beginning, middle and ending to your story. It is better when you are writing not to centre your work and only use enter when you are making a new paragraph.
Have a look at this blog as an example:
http://pbsirysj.blogspot.co.nz/2014/04/monday-quick-writes.html
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