If I was able to turn into a animal I will turn into a pig because I can roll in mud.
I'll be that animal so I can eat apples because I like eating
juice apples and have my own mud pool I would like to a pig
so I can be with my friends in the mud.
Great sentences Riley. I like the way you have used capital letters and fullstops on all your sentences. Why did you start a new line after eating, pool and pig?
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Great sentences Riley. I like the way you have used capital letters and fullstops on all your sentences. Why did you start a new line after eating, pool and pig?
because you can have two or one ideas in a sentence
You don't need a new line for a new idea.
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